Cray: Vivire

[Jai Hearts]

man/girl? hahaha...a trap

well it was a trap.

which brings us to one of the unspoken rules in that world: never sexually hares unless you want to feel the worst pain a man can feel.

due to Ellinopoulo dissliking the fact that i made his character the serious one i will replace him with a new character and will be taking a small hiatus to reform the story somewhat.

[T_RD Ellino]

You don't have to go through all that I was just joking you could just give him a change of heart or make the whole coo coo serious thing just his cover behind the happy and completely not serious true self

[Jai Hearts]

ok editing completed.

Nick is completely removed and Kuri is now the second main.

the reason i removed nick is because if i change his character now it would make no sense.

next up chapter 4.5 then chapter 5 which will show Kuri and yata's confrontation, meanhile Jai will encounter someone that will be instrumental to his future.

 

[Jai Hearts]

The Camera opens with the sounds of wings flapping in the air, a bird fields beside the screen.

This is a story about my life before, after and now.

Two young brown-haired children, one boy one girl can be seen playing together.

This is me and my brother as we play near our family's vacation home..

Every year we used to go and spend time together, leaving with smiles and fun memories.

Untill that year year.

The sky is shown going dark as fears winds begins to blow.

A cabin is shown, people can be heard moving inside.

Before a fears hurricane came from out of nowhere and...

The roof of the cabin rips form its body and flies to the sky.

changed everything.

Our parents managed to find a safe place for us, but at the cost of having no place for themselves.

My brother alone buried them near the tree they loved to sleep under, forever together.

As time passes out supplies get less and less, my brother decided to leave and go get help.

I was there alone for so long that, i didn't know if i would ever see another living person again.

Just as all hope was about to leave me the door opened.

?: Have you been all by yourself all this time ?

A woman clad in angelic attire came to save me.

It was like a sign from above, I was so happy, so happy i was saved.

But even that happiness came with sadness.

The girl can be seen eating and drinking.

?: is it any good ?

girl: Where's my brother ?

?: Brother ?

?: He told me he was gonna get help and then you came.

The woman goes silent as her eyes show one that is about to deliver a sad news.

?: Listen sweety...

She told me that no one came asking for help.

She came looking for me because she worked with me parents and knew where we were.

She didn't know that they were already gone, now i know my brother is gone too...

that is untill a two years later.

The girl can be seen a little taller and looking at a news paper.

My brother was found in the woods living with snowgals.

I was so happy that i fell to my knee's and thank God that i wasn't alone anymore.

With my newly formed connections with the angel feathers I was able to see him again.

Now 5 years later i once again visit him like i do every year.

Only this time im a full fledged Angel Feather Warrior.

A woman in angelic motif armor can be seen flying in the air.

She lands in a wide grass area full of dogs of different breeds, walking to the door and ringing the bell.

I can't wait to see the look on his dumb face.

A boy opens the door.

?: Hello. Can I help you ?

?: Who, who are you ?

Cardfight Vivire

Chapter 4.5

 The Wings of Hope.

Looks like .5 chapters are a thing for me now.

do you guys like that i go deep into the past or would you rather not know ?

do you like how i let the character herself tell the tale ?

do you wanna see chapter 5 already ?

give me some feedback and remember i could still use some more characters.

o and this ones for hunter. you're up next chapter, maybe.

and a spoiler for jaden, you have a future.

Next up chapter 5 Kill la kill each other then chapter 5.5 Garmore Born To Be WILD.

[Jaden]

I am ok with that.That I am in future since I don't mind it.Your fanfiction is good and well I like it.I don't care if you go to past or to future since when fanfiction is good and I can understand what happens there and it is fun to read then I don't care about it much.Keep up good work.

[Jai Hearts]

I am ok with that.That I am in future since I don't mind it.Your fanfiction is good and well I like it.I don't care if you go to past or to future since when fanfiction is good and I can understand what happens there and it is fun to read then I don't care about it much.Keep up good work.

jaden you fill my heart with so much joy.

truth be told i had my own ideas and stuff, but since i have no way to make a web comic it never took off.
which is kinda where my name comes from.

[Raien D. End]

can't wait...can't wait...argh...i want more cray viviere

[Jai Hearts]

im sorry its taking so long to post, its because sometimes im tired from the gym and that my original taught for the next chapters was somewhat going nowhere so im trying to beef up the quality a little.

now to work on chapter 5.

[Killa]

im sorry its taking so long to post, its because sometimes im tired from the gym and that my original taught for the next chapters was somewhat going nowhere so im trying to beef up the quality a little.

now to work on chapter 5.

Just take your time and give us something good <3

[Jai Hearts]

The camera opens to a cloaked man moving swiftly in the shadows, covered in a cloak blending into the darkness.

Has he moves he spots Kuri as she hid behind a wall.

Hunter: Target set.

Cray Vivire

Chapter 5

We see a fighter walking in the forest, his clothes suddenly transform to armor.

fighter: Who's there ? Show yourself !

Jai can be seen hiding in the grass, frozen with nervous ness.

The fighter slowly backs , turns and runs from the area.

Jai: ( Man, im just a coward. Someone else is coming.)

A silhouette of a girl can be seen walking t words Jai's direction.

Jai:(A girl. Now's my chance. I mean how hard can a girl be ?)

Jai flashes back to a scene where Kuri has her foot on his head as he is kneeling on the floor.

Jai: (Maybe i should let this one pass ? Now i need to do this, in the name of all men this the world. I must dig into my male instinct's and...) ATTACK!!!

Jai leaps towards the girl, the screen fading to white leaving only a girlish scream.

meanwhile Kuri confronts the moderator Yata The Cleaner.

Yata: Well we had to take care of some of the trash that seeped back into arena

Kuri: How did they return ?

Yata: O you know they found someone who wormed there way to power.

The screen cuts to Ravager sneezing as he counts a load of money.

Kuri: So this means your all keeping a close eye on everyone ?

Yata: Ofcourse silly. <3

Kuri: ( Yata is one of the first mods. Originally we were pretty close, but that was before his status change and his umm ...transformation.)

Yata: Well, if we're done talk. I'm off to excessive force on more perverts <3

Kuri: Wait i have one question. What is this contest for ?

Yata: To find the new mod of-course, there's no other hidden agenda.<3

Kuri: If the Gamer Master cared who would be the authority, he wouldn't have modded a greedy low life.

The camera cuts to Ravager sneezing.

Yata: Is there something you wanted to say Kuri-chan ? <3 I know you arn't one to stay silent for long.

Kuri: This change, its too drastic. I just have this feeling that something is wrong, something bad is going to happen.

Yata walks to Kuri and taps her on the head.

Yata: ...Kuri dont worry about it. Just play the game and we will talk later.

Yata begins to float in the air.

Kuri: (It's amazing how they get even super human powers in this world. Gotta admit i wouldn't mind having that power.)

Yata: O and you're being stalked.

Hunter: She knows.

Two knives gets thrown at Kuri as they both hit.

Yata: That should keep her mind off of things.

Yata teleports away, Hunter in the form of  Vermillion Gatekeeper.

Hunter: hmmp, substitution. A ninja user.

A log is seen on the floor with two knives stuck in its body.

Kuri leaps from the shadows in the form of Stealth Beast, Kuroko  at Hunter, both clashing in a battle of knives vs kunai.

Hunter removed glove form his left hand as it turns blue, releasing an blue smoke.

Hunter: This hand of mine burns with an awesome power.

Hunter moves towards Kuri grabing her right hand with his left burning it.

Kuri's scream can be heard reaching the sky, she stabs Hunter as he backs off.

Kuri runs into the darkness.

Hunter: It's no good, once i get your scent i never forget it. Do you hear me girl ? I will find you.

Kuri runs in to forest in panic tripping and falling in the darkness.

Kuri:( How are we suppose win this ? When people like that are playing ?)

Kuri looks at her burned hand.

Kuri:( Shouldn't this still be hurting ? Come to think of it, i pulled of a substitution back there. Maybe there more to this game then meets the eye ? I must survive, I must find my friends. Because I know they will survive to find me.) 

We are shown a futuristic city as a woman with angelic wings is shown walking towards the city, in her arms a passed out Jai.

GM: Yata, how goes the cleaning ?

Yata: All the obvious trash has been recycled.

GM: Good, keep me posted.

The GM stares at the monitor showing Jai in the arms of a woman with wings, Kuri setting in the darkness, Sandra killing lizard soldiers and Raijin in an area full of machines.

GM: i wonder how long it will take for them to notice that flow of time in this worlds.

The winged woman holding putts Jai down in a cave.

?:This should be a good place to hide.

She looks at Jai with a smile on her face.

?: Guess you're training can start later.

Raijin: Old man don't die.

Raijin is seen in a area full of metal walls holding a man in his arms.

Man: My hope, my dreams is now in your hands. Take it, take my machine.

The GM walks to a window showing a mansion at a mountain.

GM: Come brave fighters and show me who among you hold the spirit's of cray inside of you as i do.

TO BE CONTINUED...RIGHT AFTER THE TIME SKIP XD.


The Screen shows a female fighter climbing a mountain, she enters a dark cave.

Fighter: Wow its been 3 days. I think I'm the farthest one.

A sound of machinery can be heard in the cave.

Fighter: Is someone there ?

A man with a cyber body can be seen in the dark, its face covered with a shadow.

He opens his red eyes, they glow with lifeless light in them.

Fighter: What are you ?

Metal tentacles attack the woman, only the shadows vaguely shows whats happening to her.

The noise stops as she stands up, the metal man looking at her un-moved from his seat.

Fighter: Conversion complete.

Next up chapter 5.5: we are gonna see Garmore's past.

then chapter 6 : We get a time skip as the plot begins to thicken.




 

[ヤタ]

Gonna hurt you for using <3 when I don't <3 :v
And I'm more sadistic than that~~

[Jai Hearts]

Gonna hurt you for using <3 when I don't <3 :v
And I'm more sadistic than that~~

when using <3 he is speaking with a female voice.

and there is a limit to sadistic things i can do and i think i just reached the limit.

[ヤタ]

*pins Jai to a wall with knives*
do you want to continue <3?

[Jai Hearts]

*pins Jai to a wall with knives*
do you want to continue <3?

depends. am i allow to do to you anything i can and please ?

[Jai Hearts]

We open in a laboratory where a golden armor in the form of a wolf lies in a device.

A man is seen holding his arm on a golden armor, multiple charts are seen spiking up high on multiple screens.

Professor: Thats enough.

A woman with black marks under her eye walks towards the man.

Professor: Salutations, you got a new armor.

Garmore: Gee already ? It wasn't too long ago I got the last one.

Professor: Once we're done with the rest of the tests, you can try it on.

Garmore is seen walking in the streets of the Sanctuary.

Ahh, this takes me back. to the my first day back in the sanctuary.

We cut back to a very young Garmore with his sister many years ago.

Garmore: Stay here, I'll be back as soon as i can.

?: No, don't go.

I believe she was to young at the time to understand.

Our parent's gone, our lives in danger. Now me abandoning her.

I had no choice knowing winter was coming. And so i braved the road unknown.

Recalling every spot we passed to get here. But I was young and foolish.

Being so far from the sanctuary i got lost in the woods.

I spend days, weeks surviving alone. But with no survival knowledge at my side,

it was only a matter of time before i collapsed in the woods.

Young Garmore lies in the dirt as snow begins to fall, a creature slowly approaches him.

When i was at the brink of death, i was saved but the most unlikely of ally.

I awakened to find a wild snogal watching me with sharp eyes.

My heart stilled at that moment, untill i noticed 4 young pups eating fish.

And one fish infront of me. I look at the snowgal and notice a scar on her belly.

At that moment a buried memory in me awakens.

long ago my mother and father two military vets saved a snowgal.

She stays with us for our time, but unlimitly must be returned to the wild.

I slowly picked up the fish and begin to eat it.

I didn't like the mushy taste or the blood, but I ate it all.

In time I started draining the fish or there blood, eat fruits i see them eat, recall everything my parents ever told me about snogals.

Two years i lived with them, ate with them, bath with them.

They became my new family. But I still remembered my old family.

When i was able to find my way back to my sister she was gone.

That day i decided that i am gonna find my sister.

When my new mother passed i rallied my brothers and set of for the United Sanctuary, for my home, for my sister.

Piecing back together old memories I journeyed back home.

When i reached the Sanctuary it was all alien to me. The buildings the people,

everything changed so much.

It didn't take my brothers long to grab every fruit in sight, demolishing a melon cart. 

Melon seller: Not My Mellon's !!!!

it didn't take long for the authorities to arrive. Still thinking like a beast i attacked them.

A young man in the crowd saw my take them down.

He comes at me with a wooden sword.

Me thinking only of attacking him didn't notice the stick untill in crashed on my head.

While i was groggy they cuffed and drag me to there station.

After a few interviews and speaking for the first time in many years to another human being i learned that my sister was alive an well.

Now in the education system of the Angels.

After so many years I was so happy to see her again, both of us in tears.

We stayed together for a month untill  the young swordsman came to my home and gave me an offer.

Ahmes: Join the Royal Paladins, with your strength i know we can protect this world together.

Garmore is shown walking to his home in a wide grass field.

His many dogs run to him with joy.

So much has happened in my life, so much has changed and so much more to come.

Garmore opens the door to his home and enters.

Garmore: I'm back.

?: Welcome home brother

Garmore: Zeviel, what are you doing here ?!

Zeviel: O brother is that what you say to a sister that came from far to visit. Now Garmore what did I tell you the last time i was hear about picking up strays.

Garmore: But I didn't-

Zeviel: I was talking about him.

Zeviel points to the boy in the room.

?: ?

Cray Vivire

Chapter 5.5

Garmore, The Wolf King.

gimme some feed back and yata cant touch me.