Cray: Vivire

[Raien D. End]

nice one dude...i like my character...striking fear in the hearts of women

[Jai Hearts]

I am currently writing the next chapter.

so stay tuned.

and i would like some more feedbacks.

[Jai Hearts]

We open in the Sanctuary section of the Area Adventure world as a group of  three people are seen running.

Not far behind them a berserk Phantom Blaster Dragon approaches.

The dragon corners them in dead end, emphasis on the word dead.   
 
Cherry: Alan you know what we have to do.

Alan: Right, it's for the good of the team.

They both grab the female member for there them and hold her.

Alan/Cherry: O great dragon please accept this virgin sacrifice and let us live.

Kat: What are you doing ?

Alan: I'm sorry Kat but this is survival of the fittest.

Cherry: it's true you look good in that Silver Thorn Assistant, Irina outfit, but we can always find a new replacement.

Kat: I will haunt you guys.

The dragon prepares to slash them to death with its mighty claws.

Jai: Hey, you guys do know we can't really die right ?

Jai appears on-top of a building wearing red armor on top, but with a pirate hat and boots.

Jai: IT'S JAI TIME !!!

He leaps from the building stabbing the dragon with his rapier in the eye.

Alan: I do believe we found a crazy person.

Jai falls hard to the ground as the dragon screams in agony, it retreats.

Jai: Now...how'ed you like...that.

He tries to get up but it's clear that he tool allot of damage.

Cherry: He lost his weapon, I GOT THIS !!!.

Cherry attacks Jai, but the young knight pulls a gun in-front of his face.

Cherry: What kind of knight has a gun.

Jai: An ex-pirate apparently.

Alan: Now hold, we can talk about this.

Kat: I say shoot him, then shoot him.

Jai: I have a better idea. Why don't you guys walk out of here.

Alan: really ? Because even if one of us can't fight.

Jai: The girl is leaving.

Alan: It's still two on one.

Jai point's behind himself, Alan side steps to see a winged woman on the building Jai was on.

Jai: O and shes at grade 3, I'm grade 2. But you're still grade 1 and if I'm not mistaken, so is he.

Alan looks at him with a glare, as Jai counter's with a confidant smile.

We see Jai and the woman see the two men walk away.

?: I told you you should stayed out if it.

Jai: Hey that girl needed a chance.

?: It seem's you have a weakness to the opposite sex, little cherry boy.

ONE WEEK AGO

We have a close up of Jai opening his eyes.

As we pull back we see a women sleeping on his chest.

A panicky look appears on his face, unknown of what had happen to let up to this moment.

The women opens her eyes and stares with sleepy eyes at him.

Jai: Hi.

?: Well hello there. You were something last night.

Jai: (Last night ?!)

?: You where a beast.

Jai: (A beast ?!!)

?: I was so scared but once i accepted it i understood my place. I hope you can take responsibility.

Jai: NO, MY WILDSIDE HAS FAILED ME.

Jai is clearly seen in a panicked state, but quickly clams down.

He remembers getting knocked out by the women in-front of him.

Jai: You knocked me out.

?: Aww you're no fun. I'm at grade one and you're at grade 0. Even if it was a head to head battle, you couldn't possibly defeat me. You my boy need some training.

Her name is Zara an angel feather user.

She's told me she wanted to help me because i reminded her of a puppy she once had.

Little that I know, I would later ow her so much.

Cardfight Vivire

Chapter 6

We open in the lava area where a Dragonic Overlord is seen burning many creatures.

Jaden: Yahoo, I love being a grade 3 user.

A young man with a red jacket is seen beside the dragon.

A group of men is seen hiding behind some rocks, spying on the Jaden.

Man 1: Man we can't beat this guy, look at that thing.

Kuri: Maybe you guy's should pay more attention to your surrounding.

Kuri in the form of Stealth Rogue of a Thousand Blades, Oborozakura slices two of the men.

Man 1: No my team.

Kuri raises her sword preparing to give him the killing blow.

Jaden: Wow, hold on now.

Kuri: What do you think you are doing ?

Jaden: The boss wanted us to bring one back for Maya remember ?

Kuri: And what happened to all the ones you where burning ?

Jaden: They came out of a little extra crispy.

Dragonic Overlord picks up the man and the group behind to walk.

A ship is seen with a small group of people inside and one angry face man sitting calmly inside on the center chair.

Female: Sir it seems the're returning, and they have a gift for Maya.

Abram: Maya let's go.

Maya: Yes sir.

Kuri: After my confrontation with Hunter, I knew i was weak.

So I vowed to get stronger. Joining this team was the only way.

Abram exits the ship and behind him a timed girl in the form of Silver Thorn Beast Tamer, Emil.

Dragonic Overlord lets the man he was holding fall to the ground.

The man looks around in panic as he is surrounded.

Dragonic Overlord steps on his legs, making him immobile.

Abram: Finish him.

Man1: No please no, MERCYYYYYYY!!!.

But this, this is disgraceful.

A card is seen glowing where the man was. Maya pics it up.

Abram: Is it something you can use ?

Maya: Yes, sir.

Maya transforms into the form of Silver Thorn Beast Tamer, Ana.

Abram: Good let's go.

Abram and Maya enter's the ship.

Kuri stares up in the sky, pondering.

Jaden: Hey Kuri, ya coming ?

Jai, Raijin, Sandra. Only thos that are strong and those that are united can survive this long. Please, please still be here.

Jai: So what did you say about me ? That I'm pathetic, a troll, an annoyance to the people around me ?

?: I'm so sorry, please.

Jai is seen with his sword to the neck of a man on the floor.

Zara: Who is he ?

Jai: An old friend, that annoyed me so much.

Zara: And so your solution is to torture him the words ? And here I thought you wouldn't take my advice.

Jai and Zara are seen walking away walking away with Jai holding a card.

Jai: Man I'm finally at grade 3. Tobad this dumb system didn't get my Garmore.

Zara: It appears this system mostly gives us cards we already have in our decks.

Jai: Yea but the best part is almost every card is usable in this system.

Zara: Hey you ever heard the legend of my card and Garmore ? There brother and sister who lost there parent's in a hurricane. Zeviel was then raised with the help of the angels, while Garmore lived in the wild. After he came back and became a knight, he adopted another orphan boy.

Zara opens Jai's palm and hands him a card.

Zara: During the war between the royal paladins and shadow paladins. Garmore when't to fight in the war. Leaving that boy in the care of the Fang Light Celestial, Zeviel.

Jai looks at the card seeing a warrior in red.

The name Radiant The Heart, The Infamous___ , the remaining words covered by Jai's thumb.

Zara: With her love, he grew up into a magnificent warrior. Fighting for those who no one cared to fight for.

Jai: He, just sounds like another lame shonen hero.

Zara: Yea, he kind of is.

We cut to a scene where a Stern Blauklugar is seen evading another machine, firing at it and destroying it.

Hunter: Sir it seems he's escaped again.

?: I'm not paying you to sit around for the trill or it.

Hunter: All he needs to do is land and I will do what i do best. But it won't be my fault is he never comes down.

We zoom in on the blau, inside we see a tired Raijin piloting it.

TO BE CONTINUED

DID YOU LIKE THAT CHAPTER ? WELL DID YOU ? DID YOU ? DID YOU ?

Next chapter allot of gundam references and chapter 6.5, along with a suppliment chapter or two.

Another thing, if anyone reading feel like writing a side chapter about the arena game or cray give me a heads up, i think it would be cool if we could explore more of the world.

[katscaps kirisame]

jai, even if its a fanfic...IM A FREAKING DUDE

[T_RD Ellino]

How do we know that?

[Jai Hearts]

jai, even if its a fanfic...IM A FREAKING DUDE

and yata isnt a cross dresser.( or is he?)

[Seiryuu]

YES!! I'm piloting Stern. Weeee~~~~~~ KLL 'EM ALL XD on serious note, Jai..I love all those .5 chapters. It helps me to understand the character and the story development even more ^_^ and not to mention..more materials for me to read~ :3

[Jai Hearts]

thanks, thats exactly what i wanted to do with em. explore there units lives before i go forward.

and if you need bad ass songs to get you ready for the mecha fighting action that is to come soon.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KE51Fy_tHdc

[Seiryuu]

Sadly I can't afford to open youtube..-using mobile data to survive this past month-

[Jaden]

Hehe I am finally is fanfiction dragon user.I like my charachter it is like it should be like Yugioh GX Jaden Yuki in Season 3 yugioh GX.Gotcha good fanfiction really.

[Jai Hearts]

Hehe I am finally is fanfiction dragon user.I like my charachter it is like it should be like Yugioh GX Jaden Yuki in Season 3 yugioh GX.Gotcha good fanfiction really.

He's a happy cheerfull person, but shows a different side in combat, like miwa.

[Raien D. End]

i hope i get to kill someone,somehow they manage to escape me...oh!the .5 chapters are great!your fanfic is unpredictable...i cant even guess...
 

[Jai Hearts]

i hope i get to kill someone,somehow they manage to escape me...oh!the .5 chapters are great!your fanfic is unpredictable...i cant even guess...
 

really ? i thought it was pretty generic stuff. as for killing you are gonna get some action trying to get that bluaklugar.

but soon there will be allot of violance and deaths as this arc comes to a close in a few chapters.

then off to some revelations after *** explodes and *** falls ** ***. also one of the next .5 chapter will tell the tale of an antagonist's past and i will also try my hand in some omake stories which i hope some of you would want to also make about what ever vanguard related in the Cray Vivire wolds.

[Raien D. End]

umm...whats omake?

[Jai Hearts]

umm...whats omake?

maybe im spelling it wrong. its like a supplementary chapter. if you read manga you get these short comedic chapters. like in zettai karen children, there are some before the start of each chapter.