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[Meruem]

Hey! i though we could use this section to post cards we've made so others can coment on them! and so everyone can be happy posting their own cards and not forced into creating cards from others clan we're not interested in! let's have some fun! here are two i made!

Underworld Overlord, Amon Genesis
11000 / Dark Irregulars / Demon / Grade 3
Auto LB 4 (Soul): (Choose 3 Dark Irregulars Rear Guard and send them to soul) At the end of a battle in which your grade 3 vanguard attacks your opponent's vanguard, if your soul is six or more you may pay the cost, if paid you can superior ride this card from your soul.
Cont: This unit gains + 1000 for each Dark Irregular in your soul.

[FTLol]

Well i think the power up is a little big too high, making it a bit too hard to guard, especially if combined with another card that have high power, like the original Amon, Echo of Nemesis, or even itself. And i also think the skill is a bit spammable. I've been testing this card and i have to say, 2 26k attack each turn (more if boosted) is a little bit too strong, enough to beat your opponent in around two turn.

But, although this card is very powerful, there are a few ways to counter it (which i'm too lazy to type), and the -3 is sort of a high cost, so I wont call this card OP, its just really powerful.

That's just my opinion though, I might be wrong, and this card might actually be weak, or maybe its OP. But in my opinion, other than the name I have no objections.

And sorry for my bad english.

[Meruem]

Well i think the power up is a little big too high, making it a bit too hard to guard, especially if combined with another card that have high power, like the original Amon, Echo of Nemesis, or even itself. And i also think the skill is a bit spammable. I've been testing this card and i have to say, 2 26k attack each turn (more if boosted) is a little bit too strong, enough to beat your opponent in around two turn.

But, although this card is very powerful, there are a few ways to counter it (which i'm too lazy to type), and the -3 is sort of a high cost, so I wont call this card OP, its just really powerful.

That's just my opinion though, I might be wrong, and this card might actually be weak, or maybe its OP. But in my opinion, other than the name I have no objections.

And sorry for my bad english.

yeah! that's what i intended to do because:
1). Dark Irregulars need a huge boost, they're too far behind of the mainstream clans
2). you tend to lose a lot of adventage by soul charging, sometimes misriding (the key card u needed was soul charged)
3). Hard time making good columns (they don't have any single superior ride or superior call skill)

he has a good skill just because is hard to get a grade 3 in soul (greedy hand and Free Traveller only works from grade 0 to 2) second, u need three rear guards to activate this effect, which means you can only use it once per turn, also u need six or more DI in soul and having this card in your soul.

and yeah xD i don't like the name either but couldn't think of something else haha

here! i made another:

Celestial Judgment Gabriel
11000 / Angel / Angel Feather
LB 4: [CB x 1 Celestial, Choose 2 Celestial from your rear guard circle and place them in your damage zone, place two face-up Celestial from your damage zone in your drop zone] at the end of a battle in which this unit attacked vanguard you may pay the cost if you do, choose one face-up "Celestial Judgment Gabriel" from your damage zone and superior ride it, then place the top card of your deck in your damage zone face-up, if that card is a Celestial, this unit gains +5000 until the end of turn.

hope everyone likes it and comment! also i would like other people posting their own cards! =D

[FTLol]

he has a good skill just because is hard to get a grade 3 in soul (greedy hand and Free Traveller only works from grade 0 to 2) second, u need three rear guards to activate this effect, which means you can only use it once per turn, also u need six or more DI in soul and having this card in your soul.

Well, when I test this card I get 2 of him in the soul, which is all that you're going to need to spam his skill. And i can just ride him before i ride another card on top of it. And btw, six souls in DI is easy (except for House of Amon, i dont know why but i have a really hard time SCing with them).

And i just realized a really deadly combo with Stil Vampir.

[Meruem]

he has a good skill just because is hard to get a grade 3 in soul (greedy hand and Free Traveller only works from grade 0 to 2) second, u need three rear guards to activate this effect, which means you can only use it once per turn, also u need six or more DI in soul and having this card in your soul.

Well, when I test this card I get 2 of him in the soul, which is all that you're going to need to spam his skill. And i can just ride him before i ride another card on top of it. And btw, six souls in DI is easy (except for House of Amon, i dont know why but i have a really hard time SCing with them).

And i just realized a really deadly combo with Stil Vampir.

yeah! he also makes a good combo with dantalian, you break ride dantalian over dantalian and give power to a whole rear column and the other front row rear, you attack with one column, then vg, after attack superior ride this, for another break ride plus to vg and the other column gets twice the amount in soul

[FTLol]

And you don't think that's OP at all? -_-

[Meruem]

not when you have something like sin saver dragon which can stand twice in the same turn lol even thrice if u know how to do it xDD that's the kind of power DI needs to be on par of the mainstream clans

[Winds~]

Please 

Guardian of the Skies, Fenghuang
G3/Narukami/Crit1/Twindrive
Power: 11,000
Shield: 0
[ACT][VG][CB2] When this unit attacks, you may pay the cost, if paid, this unit gets 1 critical and " [CONT][VG] This unit battles every unit in your opponents front row. ".
[ACT][VG][LB4] For every unit sent to the drop zone, every unit gets [Power+5,000]
[ACT][VG][CB2] Choose up to 3 of your opponents back row rear guards, send them to the drop zone.

[FTLol]

Please 
[ACT][VG][CB2] When this unit attacks, you may pay the cost, if paid, this unit gets 1 critical and " [CONT][VG] This unit battles every unit in your opponents front row. ".

The cost should be CB3 IMO, especially since its not LB. But even if its CB3 it'll still make Vermilion bad, so maybe you should make it LB.

[ACT][VG][LB4] For every unit sent to the drop zone, every unit gets [Power+5,000]

Okay, all units get +5k Power is a bit too much.

[ACT][VG][CB2] Choose up to 3 of your opponents back row rear guards, send them to the drop zone.

The cost is too cheap. Vowing Saber is a LB with the same CB and a lock cost. Sure, he doesn't get +10k like Saber does, but the second skill more than makes up for it.

Well, I dont know what to say, it seems like you just take all the good skills out there, power them up, and slap them together. I would like to scream OP but that would make me sound like a noob. I can give some suggestions though:

A. Make the first skill LB and remove the second skill (not recommended),
B. Remove the third skill and make the second skill power up front row only,
C. Remove the first skill and make the third skill something like "Your opponent chooses 2 of his rearguards, and retire them".

And sorry for my bad english (quoted from Rem, too lazy to do it properly).

EDIT: Ignore the suggestions, I just realized the second skill would still be too strong, so I made some new suggestions:
1.  Make the first skill LB and either remove the critical or make it CB3,
2. Change the second skill to something like "[AUTO](VC)[LB4] When your opponents rearguard is sent to the drop zone, this card gets "[CONT](VC) During your turn, all of your unit gets power +3000" until the end of your turn. This skill cannot be used for the rest of the turn"
3. Make the third skill LB and change it into something like "Your opponent chooses 2 of his rearguards, and retire them".

After that, choose either the first or third skill and remove them.

[NextGenNick]

Well i think the power up is a little big too high, making it a bit too hard to guard, especially if combined with another card that have high power, like the original Amon, Echo of Nemesis, or even itself. And i also think the skill is a bit spammable. I've been testing this card and i have to say, 2 26k attack each turn (more if boosted) is a little bit too strong, enough to beat your opponent in around two turn.

And sorry for my bad english.

cough cough, Sing Saver.

[Meruem]

Well i think the power up is a little big too high, making it a bit too hard to guard, especially if combined with another card that have high power, like the original Amon, Echo of Nemesis, or even itself. And i also think the skill is a bit spammable. I've been testing this card and i have to say, 2 26k attack each turn (more if boosted) is a little bit too strong, enough to beat your opponent in around two turn.

And sorry for my bad english.

cough cough, Sing Saver.

yeah, that's what i said xDD also, nobody said anything about my Angel Feather card xD! is that bad? <.<

[FTLol]

No its not bad, I just don't have any complaints for now.

[ヤタ]

From now on, I'd like to see people making their own threads for cards, to liven this place up a little~
I do love the quality of Critique in here for the most part though :3

[FTLol]

From now on, I'd like to see people making their own threads for cards, to liven this place up a little~

Wouldn't there be too much thread though?

[ヤタ]

Not really, just keep your things together, or possibly just keep your own thread to post all your cards in ^^
Better than all in one thread, makes this place look quiet :/