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Title: Legions
Post by: T_RD Ellino on June 10, 2014, 03:15:14 PM
Fanmade Legions cause I'm bored ~Nippa

Dragonic Overlord "The Chaos"
Kagero
Flame Dragon
Grade 3
11000
Act VC:Legion:20000"Dragonic DeathBlade" (If your opponent has a grade 3 or greater vanguard, only once, this unit may return four cards from your drop zone to your deck, and search your deck for the specified card, and perform Legion.)
Cont VC:If this unit is in legion all your kagero gets "Auto VC/RC:(CB1 and discard 1 card)When this unit's attack hits if this unit hasn't used this skill this turn you may pay the cost,if paid choose up to one of your opponent's rear guards retire it and stand this unit"
Auto VC:When this unit attacks a Vg this unit gets power + 2000 until the end of that battle

Dragonic DeathBlade
Kagero
Flame Dragon
Grade 2
9000
Auto RC:When your VG performs Legion,you may choose an opponent's rear guard in the back row and retire it


Star-Vader,Supernova Dragon
Link Joker
Cyber Dragon
Grade 3
11000
Act VC:Legion 20000 "Star-Vader,Bleeding Star Dragon" (If your opponent has a grade 3 or greater vanguard, only once, this unit may return four cards from your drop zone to your deck, and search your deck for the specified card, and perform Legion.)
ACt VC:(Cb2 "Star-Vader")If this unit is in Legion choose up top 2 of your opponent's rear guards or mates and lock them
Auto VC:When this unit attacks a VG this unit gets power + 2000 until the end of that battle

Star-Vader,Bleeding Star Dragon
Link Joker
Cyber dragon
Grade 2
9000
Auto RC:When your VG performs Legion,Choose up to one of your opponent's rear guards and lock it

Catastrophy Dragon,Omega Rex
Tachikaze
DinoDragon
Grade 3
11000
Act VC:Legion 20000 "Rampage Dragon,Cannor Raptor" (If your opponent has a grade 3 or greater vanguard, only once, this unit may return four cards from your drop zone to your deck, and search your deck for the specified card, and perform Legion.)
Auto VC:When this unit attacks a VG,if this unit is in Legion this unit gets power + 10000 and critical + 1 until the end of that battle
Auto VC:When this unit's attack hits if there is another unit in the center column retire 2 of your rear guards

Rampage Dragon,Cannon Raptor
Tachikaze
DinoDragon
Grade 2
9000
Auto RC:When your VG performs Legion,choose one of your "Tachikaze" and that unit cannot be retired by card effects this turn


Soul Knight,Salvation Dragon
Royal Paladin
Grade 3
Cosmo Dragon
11000
Act VC:Legion 20000 "Breeding Soul Knight,Akane"  (If your opponent has a grade 3 or greater vanguard, only once, this unit may return four cards from your drop zone to your deck, and search your deck for the specified card, and perform Legion.)
Auto VC:(SB 3)If this unit is in Legion choose up to 3 of your "Royal Paladin" and those units get power + 5000 until the end phase
Auto VC:When this unit attacks if there is another unit in the center column this unit gets power + 3000 until the end of that battle

Breeding Soul Knight,Akane
Royal Paladin
Human
Grade 2
9000
Auto RC:When your Vg performs Legion search your deck for up to one "Royal Paladin" "High Beast" and call it to RC


Corrupted Knight,Phantom Blaster Chaos
Shadow paladin
Abyss Dragon
Grade 3
11000
Act VC:Legion 20000 "Blaster Dark Phantom"(If your opponent has a grade 3 or greater vanguard, only once, this unit may return four cards from your drop zone to your deck, and search your deck for the specified card, and perform Legion.)
Act VC:(Retire this unit's mate)At the end of the battle that this unit attacked a VG if the attack did not hit you may pay the cost,if paid stand this unit and this unit gets power + 3000 and critical + 1 until the end phase
Auto VC:When this unit attacks a VG this unit gets power + 2000 until the end of that battle

Blaster Dark Phantom
Shadow paladin
Human
Grade 2
9000
Auto:(Cb 1)When this unit is placed on RC you may pay the cost,if paid retire one of your opponent's grade 2 or lower rear guards

Emperor Of Flames,Burning Kagaku
Nenriki Hoka
Demon
Grade 3
11000
Act VC:Legion 20000 "Empress Of Flames,Selenia" (If your opponent has a grade 3 or greater vanguard, only once, this unit may return four cards from your drop zone to your deck, and search your deck for the specified card, and perform Legion.)
Act VC:(Cb 1 and discard 1 card)If this unit is in Legion retire 2 of your opponent's rear guards
Auto VC:When this unit attacks,if there is another unit in the center column this unit gets power + 3000 until the end of that battle

Empress Of Flames,Selenia
Nenriki Hoka
Demon
Grade 2
9000
Auto RC:When your Vg performs Legion choose 1 of your opponent's back row rear guards and retire it


Blue Storm Tidal Dragon,Maelstrom
Aqua Force
Tear Dragon
Grade 3
11000
Act VC:Legion 20000 "Blue Storm Assault" (If your opponent has a grade 3 or greater vanguard, only once, this unit may return four cards from your drop zone to your deck, and search your deck for the specified card, and perform Legion.)
Auto VC:(Cb1 "Blue Storm")When this unit attacks a VG if this unit is in legion and it's the fourth or more battle this turn,you may pay the cost, if paid this unit gets power + 5000 until the end phase and if the attack doesn't hit choose 2 of your opponent's back row rear guards and retire them
Auto VC:When this unit's attack hits a VG,if there is another unit with "blue Storm" in it's card name in the center column stand one of your rear guards
 
Blue Storm Assault
Aqua Force
Aquaroid
Grade 2
9000
Auto RC:At the end of the battle that this unit attacked a VG if your VG is in Legion you may stand this unit,This ability cannot be used for the rest of that turn


Arboros Dragon Of Good Will,Sephiroth
Neo Nectar
Forest Dragon
Grade 3
11000
Act VC:Legion 20000 "Arboros Sage,Mirk" (If your opponent has a grade 3 or greater vanguard, only once, this unit may return four cards from your drop zone to your deck, and search your deck for the specified card, and perform Legion.)
Cont VC:If this unit is in Legion all your units get power + 3000 for each unit with the same name on your field
Auto:(Cb 2)When this unit is placed on VC,You may pay the cost,if paid choose u to 2 of your rear guards,search your deck for up to one unit with the same name as each of those units and call it ro RC

Arboros Sage,Mirk
Neo Nectar
Bioroid
Grade 2
9000
Auto RC:(cb 1)When your VG performs legion you may pay the cost,if paid choose one of your rear guards search your deck for up to one card with the same name as that unit and call it to RC
Title: Re: Legions
Post by: strtegistjdb on June 10, 2014, 04:16:14 PM
First one: 4/10 it just isn't Dragonic Overlord...
Second one: 6/10 don't approve of the mate but it is nice being able to lock a legion-mate.
Third one: 2/10 give it a skill where you retire before giving power, and if it is raptor it seems more likely to be a unit calling ability not a power based one.
Fourth one: 3/10 while it is Royals it seems more High-Beast base so give it an [ACT] that calls units instead.

Timer Rhino
Great Nature/ Warbeast
Grade 2/ Power 9000
[AUTO] (RC) When this card's attack hits a vanguard, if your vanguard is in legion you may give one of your rear-guard's "During your End Phase, when this unit is sent to the Drop Zone, you may turn one damage face-up." until the end of the turn.

Pendulum Horse
Great Nature/ Warbeast
Grade 3/ Power 11000
[ACT](VC)Legion 20000 "Timer Rhino" (If your opponent has a Grade 3 or greater vanguard, only use once, you may return four cards from your Drop Zone to your deck and search your deck for the specified card and perform Legion)
[AUTO](VC) If this card attacks your opponent's vanguard while this unit is in Legion, you may designate up to two Great Nature rear-guards and give them Power +4000 and retire them at the beginning of your End Phase. When those units are sent to the Drop Zone, you may return all units sent to the Drop Zone during the beginning of the End Phase to your hand and draw one card.
Title: Re: Legions
Post by: T_RD Ellino on June 10, 2014, 04:19:22 PM
And you called MY units bad?So you pretty much give 2 of your units 4k and then get them back for guarding and draw a card as well.......
2/10 no...just no
Title: Re: Legions
Post by: Jai Hearts on June 10, 2014, 06:27:00 PM
And you called MY units bad?So you pretty much give 2 of your units 4k and then get them back for guarding and draw a card as well.......
2/10 no...just no

a critic for fan made cards, thats so original (he said like a 16 yov blonde girl)
Title: Re: Legions
Post by: T_RD Ellino on June 11, 2014, 07:13:46 AM
And you called MY units bad?So you pretty much give 2 of your units 4k and then get them back for guarding and draw a card as well.......
2/10 no...just no

a critic for fan made cards, thats so original (he said like a 16 yov blonde girl)

He started it
Title: Re: Legions
Post by: jennymori on June 11, 2014, 03:20:51 PM
Aspiring Meteor Witch, Komori -G2 9k, [Act](R) When this unit attacks, if you're Vanguard is in Legion, Declare the name of an <<Oracle Think Tank Card>>, if the card you declared is revealed from the top card of your deck, you may Retire one of your opponents Rear guards furthermore, if the card reveled is one of the card(s) on your vanguard circle, you may draw a card.

Meteor Witch, Inuyama -G3, 11k, Legion 20k [Aspiring Meteor Witch, Komori]. [CONT] all cards named "Scarlet Witch, CoCo" in your soul do not count as being in the soul. [Act] When this card is Rode over "Scarlet Witch, CoCo" this card gains the ability: [ACT][V] CB3 When this card is placed on the Vanguard Circle, if there is 2 or less cards in your soul, you may pay the cost and Draw 4 Cards then you may put a card in your soul on the bottom of your deck. [CONT] During your turn, if there are no cards in your soul, this card gains 4000 Power. While this unit is in Legion, this Unit gains "[Cont]SB2 If you have 2 or more cards in soul, you may pay the cost, if you do search your deck for a card named either Meteor Witch, Inuyama, Inspiriing Meteor Witch, Komori, or Scarlet Witch, CoCo. shuffle your deck afterwards".

Title: Re: Legions
Post by: T_RD Ellino on June 11, 2014, 03:25:45 PM
Your g2 persona draws XD
Title: Re: Legions
Post by: AloisTrancy on June 11, 2014, 07:23:34 PM
No offense, but that legion has too many skills. The Draw 4 alone is already a very powerful ability, let alone with the returning your soul to your deck. Then it gains 4000 power, is a Legion unit, and gets third skill that lets you search cards from your deck for SB2.

First and foremost, you don't need to have it treat CoCo as not being in the soul, since you can just return her to the deck with the first skill anyways, so the soul would be at zero. The second issue is that it's Second and Third Skills should actually be "AUTO". Additionally, you can reword the second skill to this:
[AUTO](VC)[Counter Blast (3)]: When you ride this unit over a card named "Scarlet Witch, CoCo", if there are 2 or less cards in your soul, you may pay the cost. If you do, Draw 4 cards, choose 1 card from your soul and place it at the bottom of your Deck.
As for the third skill, Change it to this:
[CONT](VC): During your turn, if this unit is in Legion and there are no cards in your soul, this unit gets [Power]+4000 and "[ACT](VC)[Soul Blast 2] Search your Deck for up to one card named "Aspiring Meteor Witch, Komori", "Meteor Witch, Inuyama", or "Scarlet Witch, CoCo" and place it in your hand. Shuffle your Deck afterwards."

That should make the card a little more balanced. As for the mate, your wording is mostly good, but the skill could be a little more fair. I would Suggest this:
[AUTO](RC): When this unit attacks an opponent's Vanguard, if your Vanguard is in Legion, you may declare the name of an <<Oracle Think Tank>> and reveal the top card of your Deck. If the revealed card is the card you declared, choose up to one of your opponent's rearguards and retire it. Then, if the revealed card has the same name as a unit on your (VC), draw a card.
Title: Re: Legions
Post by: T_RD Ellino on June 12, 2014, 11:00:19 AM
Added 2 more cause I got bored
Title: Re: Legions
Post by: strtegistjdb on July 01, 2014, 12:38:22 AM
I was just giving opinion that could be used for edit. Also, Great-Nature does too much resurrection as it is when my real play-style has hand advantage. Figure I give it a skill that isn't too broken that seems more like a bermuda skill since everybody knows they love to take back every move they make and keep hand with that. Plus, it's not like OTTs with multi-draws every turn. Great-Nature does things like this daily. Ps. Legions still haven't been introduced to every clan so only inspiration we have right now is limit breaks and stuff like that. Not as easy to keep within the boundaries already laid down...